Pretty cool!
Good diversity and build-up! :O
YOU DID IT -for that part- :P
The clarity isn't very good at some point.. Some gentle points later it's much better. I can hear you've put effort in this! It's overall a pretty good track, 7! Original too!
See ya!
R-VeeBee
Not sure what you mean by I did it on diversity when I got a 7. Maybe I didn't quite do it. I know I'm not so good at mastering, but it's the composition that counts right? I can always remix this song whenever I feel like, but compostion wise...not everyone can do this. Than it is my first attempt in rave so I don't expect stellar 10/10 reviews. I will get better. Besides the clarity since that is easy to fix (I'll get someone else to master my track :)) what else needs fixing? Thanks for the review and I see you like more gentle songs. Yah mellow songs are better. Bye for now.
Yeah
I like it man, good stuff
Nice beats and clarity
Makes my head bob
Nice sounds and diverse
Only thing.. it's a bit like a main beat with only some effects added and nothing more. It's only the same beat all the way on the background.
Ah well
I dig it
Peace,
R-VeeBee
Well, it's supposed to be a background loop, so I tried to keep it somewhat basic. I didn't want it to be way out there.
Hi there
Better build-up than 'Stained Chrome':)
Nice idea again. But this track doesn't sound as clear as 'Stained Chrome' though.
It sounds very chaotic. I understand the idea, but this melody... all these 'melodies' just go through eachother without any meaning or good main melody. You've got professional elements in it.. If you'd combine the quality of 'Stained Chrome' with the build-up in this track, you'd make an excellent track! :)
Keep it up, you can do it!
Cya,
R-VeeBee
Nothing to add, but I'll definitely keep that criticism in mind. ;) Thanks for the review!
Hello!
Well, the mixing, EQ-ing and stuff is pretty good in this track! But the first percussion that comes in kind of screws up the track a bit. It sounds weird and distorted, and mono to. Maybe you should make a more stereo basic-rhytm like that one, but with other samples for the same instruments :)
The build-up is very lame, sorry, you should really work on that.. this is like: first part, first part + second part, first part + second part + third part etc. etc.
You know what I mean. Simple beginner-build up.. And I can hear (when I listen to the sound quality) that you're not a BEGINNER. Because the idea and the clarity is very good!
I overall like this track pretty much :)
Keep it up, but improve some things ;)
Cya,
R-VeeBee
It's one of my better songs, I'll agree... and much of that criticism I wouldn't have thought of. It'll help... I'll keep it in mind. :) Thanks for the review, much appreciated.
(Psst... actually, I AM a beginner. I've been making music as long as I've been submitting it. I've come a long way but I have even farther to go. XD)
Very good!!
I really like this track. The mixing and mastering is pretty good you know.. but later in the track it gets a little distorted I can hear. Try a soft clipper or limiter or just put the volume a little lower of the track. :)
Very well made, original stuff, relaxing..
Good job!
You no like brass :) Yeah the distorted part was the brass section. I had to have some horns since all those angel pictures have them playing horns. I'm quite impressed myself with the mastering. I usually suck at it, but maybe I'm finally getting better. Still more practice needed. I see your the new guy on NG. I'll take a sample of your new song soon. Thanks for review.
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